Welcome
Hello! And Welcome to my As Media Studies Blog.
Here I have posted up all my work during the course for my class mates and other people to comment on and tell me whats good and what I could have improved on.
Please have a great look around and leave appropriate comments!
Enjoy my blog!
Thankyou.
Amy Dixon
What I Like:
ReplyDelete- Main image fills page.
- It's been cut out well.
- Masthead stands out.
- Good fonts used.
What could be improved:
- Less gaps.
I like the way the masthead stands out and the way you have cut out the picture is really good. Also you have not used too many colours so it is not overpowering. The fonts used are also good. However you could have filled the gaps a little more.
ReplyDeleteI like the way the image has people at different levels (high, medium and low) which gives you a lot of room to add strap lines and secondary images. There are still a few gaps that could be filled but other than that the magazine shows proffesional quality!
ReplyDeleteI like the way you have the cover lines in little coloured strips, it makes the cover look quite professional. There is a good colour scheme which i think gives the cover a good style. I like the masthead font and i think that the strapline is very clever.
ReplyDeleteTo improve i would fill some of the gaps,
I like the title and the image is really strong however I dont like the colour scheme that could have been a better colour.
ReplyDeleteI like the way its laid out it looks like a real magazine would look like.
i like the way the the image is cut out of the background and i like the layout and i really like the font
ReplyDeleteI like the masthead, I think it does a good job of drawing the eye. Plus I like the main image, and the fonts. I do think that the top part of the page around the masthead could have less space around it.
ReplyDeletethis has really improved from you prelim task becasue your layout it better and also you fonts atand out more
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